If You Die Outside the Box

When you die
you are not dust
you are humus
you are humors
of the earth
You are still
quite wet
still a busybody
getting into everything
still say
Use me
or let me
use you



2 thoughts on “If You Die Outside the Box

  1. electronic existentialist says:

    Three is the magic number in writing, and this poem is really strong, but I would add another H alliteration in the beginning to fill it out. The last three lines are very powerful.


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